[背诵范文]
One Thing I'm Proud of
l still remember how I became a good table tennis player.The first day I went to high _ school,.I saw some of myclassmates playing table tennis.Amazed at how skillful they werel was determined to be just as good.Later on, I often watchedthem carefully to learn their techniques.Then I kept practisinguntil I became confident enough to challenge the good players.Atthe end of the term I became one of the best players in my class.
l am really proud of this experience,because it helps merealise that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve our goalsthrough hard work, and it also helps me better understand theproverb“Practice makes perfect.”

[高分亮点]
1．本文中使用了较多的高级词汇，如: amazed at; bedetermined to; as good;techniques; keep practising; becomeconfident; challenge; fulfill our potential; achieve our goals 等。
2．高级句式的运用增加了文章的亮点，如how引导的宾语从句; the first day引导时间状语从句;过去分词短语作状语;until引导的时间状语从句;because引导的原因状语从句中又含有and连接的两个并列句。
3．形容词和副词的恰当运用让文章丰满起来。如: a goodtable tennis player ; how skillful; watched them carefully ; becameconfident enough; the best players; be really proud of; betterunderstand等。