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As the saying goes，“Friendship is like sunshine, it keepsus warm and helps us grow."I think it is important for us tomake good friends so that we can always hang out togetherand have fun.
 like to choose people who are kind,honest and helpfulas my friends. I like to share my thoughts and fears with themwhenexer.L.get.into. trouble.
Now 1 have some good friends who trust me. I alwayscare about what has happened to them, so I call them once aweek. I always go out with my friends, chatting and.playing. Itry to offer some advice to my friends when necessary. In thisway I am able to maintain friendships.

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1．本文要点齐全，条理清晰，层次分明。首段介绍友谊的重要性，接着介绍如何交友，怎样与朋友相处，最后介绍如何保持友谊。
2．在遣词造句方面，高级词汇和句式的使用使文章增色不少。例如hang out, have fun, share ... with, care about,省略that的宾语从句(I think it is ...), it作形式主语(it is important for usto make ...)， so that引导的目的状语从句(so that we can ..),whenever引导的时间状语从句，现在分词短语作伴随状语等，使文章的语言表达形式灵活多变。