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题目要求:假设你是李华,你的朋友Tony 去了美国上高中,他写信告诉你他很不习惯美国的校园生活,感到很孤独。请你根据要求用英语给他写一封建议信。
1.学好英语,多交一些朋友,从而增加和别人交流的机会;
2.学会独立学习,有困难向老师求助;
3.积极参加各种活动,使自己的生活更加丰富有趣。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tony,
I'm sorry to hear that you feel it difficult to get _used to thenew school life in America. As your best friend, T'd like to giveyou some suggestions.
First of all, learning English well is a must.Only when youspeakfluent English can you find more opportunities tocommunicate with others. Secondly, you'd better learn to studyindependently.Meanwhile, never hesitate to turn to your teachersfor help when you are in trouble. What's more, try to make morefriends and take an active part in various activities organized byyour school, which will not only help you remove your loneliness butalso make your life more interesting.Of course, sometimes readinginteresting books can also give you great fun.
What do you think of my opinions? Believe in yourself and youwill enjoy your new school life there soon.
Yours,Li Hua
1.本文作为一封建议信,格式正确,要点齐全,行文连贯,细节补充恰当合理。
2.作者写作功底深厚,对语言的掌控力较强,全文有多处用词生动形象,表达恰当充分,如a must, never hesitate, remove,believe in, enjoy 。
3.全文使用了很多高级句式,如 that引导的宾语从句,“feel+it+adj.+to do ...”句式;only+状语从句引起的倒装;which引导的非限制性定语从句;“not only... but also ..”句型等。
4. first of all, secondly,meanwhile,what's more等过渡词的运用使文章衔接紧密,过渡自然。